Independence Day/How do you feel about the USA?
(from Red, White, and Blue by Two of a Kind)
Take a look at the editing on the document below! (If you want to do a serious comparison of the different drafts, go to this web site.) Talk about modelling how to revise your writing, how to create a compromise, and how to provide a window on the past!
Click on the picture to see the whole thing.
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